All Comments on 'Vanessa and Veronica Ch. 03'

Love the update, somebody is about to get told. Luc will rue the day that he every consider thinking with his dick offered no consequences. Can't wait to read more........as always loving all your stories Kala

Wow I think they're about to find out that both of the Twins have a bit of a temper. Poor Luc just bow your head in shame for your whorish ways and taking your brother down in flames with you... tsk tsk tsk smh.

Looks like luc may have to come clean about being a womanizer.....not only that he is going to feel vanessa's wrath early on. But I am glad that they finally have met their mates. I am also wondering how their dad is going to react to luc. Loving it so far!

i can not wait for the twins to get their claws into those women and then Luc is going to learn the meaning of hell hath no fury like a women scorn. Your chapters keep getting better and better. I am amazed with the amount of stories you have running and how frequent you update that the chapters are always so interesting looking forward to your next chapter

Loving it,more please.

Luc and Rik better brace themselves

Next..

*chuckling* Too funny at the end when Veronica said, " Well you heard her, who are they?" *busted* lol Good reading! Keep the stories coming, please. :)

TemptressZee~

Woo Wee looking forward to see how Rik and Luc get outta this mess that they've gotten themselves in they better start talking real fast and make it good too can't wait to see what happens next please update again soon thanks!

It is on like Donkey Kong now!!!!

I am willing to bet that it will be Veronica that launches the first salvo. It won't be pretty for my boy, but he can't say he wasn't warned well in advance by Rik...oh well.

Luc just don't know. Still water runs deep and his "sexual roosters" are finally coming home to roost. O.M.G. ....nuf said.

Pleas update this story soon, I am loving the twins. Now how is Luc going to get out of this?

I am waiting for the beat down to commence!!! Really how stupid can you be to shout out an man that is obviously on date? She still approaches even though Luc didn't appear happy to see her. Dumb, dumb, ditty!!!

now this is a twist, a fun one. :)

continue please...

Not a great thing to have happen on your first date with your mate, but it would have happened eventually! Suck it up guys, and start grovelling!

Sinclaire women don't play!!!

I love, love, loving reading your stories. I can't tell you how refreshing it is to see larger her black women as the focus of these stories. What I'm really not appreciating is this mini "morality play" about lucs sexual activity. I'm disappointed that we can't show men and women with active, abundant sex lives without shaming them for it. I could do without that here.

I didn't feel that Luc was being "shamed" but was being warned to think about what he was doing and that his promiscuity would come back and bite him in the ass.

Luc was (is?) a man whore, lol

Rik and Luc have some splainin' to do!

Kick some ass twins and kic your mates ass to

TROUBLE!!!!

Perhaps a normal romance! I must confess I am a little over tired of all this rape crap. I was beginning to think that you only wrote the same story over and over only with different names. BTW, you need an editor....good punctuation but too many little grammatical slips. You really are too good a writer not to have an editor..... Doctime