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by SlightlyDisturbed

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
good story.....

But please, proofread and EDIT. "....she let out a grown"..... NO! She let out a groan.....

Otherwise, I really like the premise and build up!

AnomandarisAnomandarisalmost 12 years ago
Agreed wtih below

Please find a copy editor. Good story, looking forward to more buildup, and hopefully one hell of a hot conculsion.

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