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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Interesting premise

I like! I hope you continue the concept. I think having the bra at the end though breaks the suspension of disbelief though. You should come up with at least some vaguely plausible explanation for that next time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great story

except June Cleaver without pubic hair would be like her without the string of pearls. Keep her frozen in time; back when women were women and not mindless bimbos who try anything to appeal to the frat boy and pedophile mentalities. Having Larry Mondello appear as a Peeping Tom might be an idea.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fantastic

This was a fantastic story, I hope you do a sequel with June Clever. Some other ideas for other stories you could do along this same line; Mary Ann from Gilligsn's Island...Cathy (the cousin) from The Patty Duke Show...Barbara Gordon from Batman....Ma Ingalls from Little House on the Praire

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WHO GOT JUNE CLEAVERS BEAVER !

Good story,I used to watch Leave It To Beaver when I was a kid and never really thought abou Mrs Cleavers Beaver at all until I read the story and it was great hopefully youll do more of the same story ideas with other TV Moms ,keep the storys cumming and cumming and cumming as often as you can .Great fucking job!

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