All Comments on 'Was It Ravishment?'

by lonny37

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lovetolick7lovetolick7about 19 years ago
Nice story

Great story well written, only thing that would make it better is if it were true

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Wonderful concept!

I love stories like these.

RiokRiokalmost 19 years ago
Fact or Fiction, Lonny?

I'm so glad that I don't like hockey or have car problems?

Loved your story, and pictured myself ravaging your adorable body. Rick

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Loved the Tale

Would have loved to have been you when he took you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
interesting concept

i notice all 3 of your stories have lengthy buildups and fast almost brutal sex. it makes me think you are very big on extensive forepklay but when you are ready you want it hard and rough. you are a gorgeous woman. i would like to pick you up with your car broken down on a lonely highjway. fondle your magnificent breasts and work your nipples until you were panting...and i feel sure that would do it even if it took a long time...then pull yout of the car, throw you over the hood and fuck you until you cunt and my cock were sore. i thinkl you want this badly and i hope you get it...more than once. you write very well but the denouement swoops down a bt too quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Not bad

A little stilted...But you write well, maybe it needs more dialogue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great story

Hoped for a second part. I am sure they will meet again

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I have a number of stories in me, some are true, some are just fantasies. A lot of them have to do with meeting a strange man far from here in a strange motel and letting him do whatever he pleases to me.