by lonny37
Great story well written, only thing that would make it better is if it were true
I'm so glad that I don't like hockey or have car problems?
Loved your story, and pictured myself ravaging your adorable body. Rick
i notice all 3 of your stories have lengthy buildups and fast almost brutal sex. it makes me think you are very big on extensive forepklay but when you are ready you want it hard and rough. you are a gorgeous woman. i would like to pick you up with your car broken down on a lonely highjway. fondle your magnificent breasts and work your nipples until you were panting...and i feel sure that would do it even if it took a long time...then pull yout of the car, throw you over the hood and fuck you until you cunt and my cock were sore. i thinkl you want this badly and i hope you get it...more than once. you write very well but the denouement swoops down a bt too quickly.
A little stilted...But you write well, maybe it needs more dialogue.