All Comments on 'Well Deserved'

This is my first bit of smut I've ever written, it was fun and I look forward to writing more!

... and as a first effort, very good too. I really enjoyed it, although it could have done with being a little longer and taking more time to develop.

4 *s, thanks and please write more for us!

Very good first effort with this story. I'm laughing now because I will sound like some of these other commentators on these stories when I say "it should be in another category, something like Sci-Fi and Fantasy". Well, not really but finding a good woman like this is certainly a fantasy these days.

4 stars.

and obviously written by an adult. Few spelling/typo errors, "tired" where you probably meant "tried", generally good grammar and competent punctuation, although you seem to favor sentence structures that call for semi-colons rather than commas. I enjoyed your characters and would like to see them developed further. Overall, an excellent initial effort and I'm looking forward to more.

Damn, I had thought I'd changed that before I posted this. Oh well. I tend to be a bit iffy on when to use semicolons, so I just avoid them because I feel like misusing them would be more obnoxious than not using them. Next time!

Damn....loved this!