All Comments on 'When We Meet'

This story is OK as far as it went. However, it seems more like just part of the story. I would have appreciated more introduction so that the first meeting could be placed into context. Perhaps Michael and Kelly could meet for coffee, a meal, or dessert before going to the room. Let us get to know the characters and their situation before they start removing each other's clothes.

As written, the story probably belongs in a different category such as Erotic Couples. Neither party was reluctant and both consented. The sex may have been a little rough, but not enough for this category.

Please consider adding more to this story, and resubmitting it.

Please change the category, it is not correct.