All Comments on 'Why Should I Beg?'

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PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpetealmost 13 years ago
Titles should match.....

the text, tense and p.o.v. of story. Therefore it might be called, "Why should SHE beg to be a slut"? Keep trying, maybe.

kelsaffirmkelsaffirmalmost 13 years ago
It is all about polarity, well maybe not all...

Enjoyable and entertaining and justine taps into her justice - that it seems for many images she was not pursuing. Actually I don't believe she was, it just happened as a result of her misunderstanding of joey the insensitive jerk. Our melting pot culture has spent several generations generating this scenario - the beetles vicarious imagery of let it be when life twists and turns - further invites the resulting opposites attracting polarity possibilities; and of course justine will overwhelm and hypnotize herself with horniness before she lets the pedestal fade. The most moral EL and DIZZ characters just have oil in the lamp when the door opens and appreciate human nature in the late 20th and early 21st century.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good!

Awesome story! Thanks!

wwwreadcomwwwreadcomalmost 13 years ago
Mm mm good....

That was one hell of a story!

kirstymiakirstymiaover 1 year ago

Absolutely loved reading this xxxx tysm

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I dabble in writing and drawing. I enjoy writing descriptive scenes, fantasy stories, interracial, and multi-somes. I post erotic drawings on HardwoodComics.blogspot.com I also post art on andyvines.deviantart.com