by lilgirlsix
yes defiantly mating season. It's funny in a way for had they not joined the rouge group who knows how long it would have taken for the mates to find one another. Now that most everyone is happy I have to wonder what the last 2 bad boys are planning.
As always, left wanting more. Keep up the good work!
I am enjoying this story a lot, and like the humor you put into it along with the hot sex and drama. Thanks for posting regularly so the story is always fresh in my mind when a new chapter comes up. I understand that not all authors have the time, discipline, or inspiration to write and post frequently, but when I wait anywhere from a month to a year for the next chapter the story loses something. Your story flows beautifully, thanks.
Yves
I don't want Gary to get him to hurt any of the pack wolves!! I love this whole pack! I wonder who Sarahs mate is??? Also how much older is she than him?
I am enjoying this story so much! Love the characters, plot, everything about it! Only one teeny tiny suggestion, please don't overuse the word "leering". It is just creepy! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Love it! Please keep writing! I'm addicted, thank you for the amazing stories!!!
I agree with Katgoddess that there must be something in the water.
Good fast moving story and thanks for the fast pace of the story.
It just keeps getting better and better. I repeat my comment from the last chapter "WOW". Thank you.
I must agree with most everyone's post, this story is both amazing and addicting. And there really has to be something in the water that pack drinks :D Truly, this is a wonderful story and can not wait to read more
And now you know why I LOVE WERES!!!! For pure sexual power you can't beat them. They are Klingons...damn smokin' hot Klingons!!!
Noisy, lustful, high energy fucking is the objective and they score high consistently for achieving the mark. Hot damn!!!!!
Lila and Nathan were hotter, in my opinion, than the Alpha pair. Lord yes .......yezzzzzzzzzzz lord!!!
The only complaint I have is the over use or 'leering look' & 'leered', seems every look anyone gives another is leering, surely a writer as good as you, could find another way to describe a look? Oh and you use 'breath' a lot of the time when it should be 'breathe'.
i.e: 'out of breath'.... 'struggled to breathe'
I agree with the previous comment about using leering over and over it just sounds so crude to me.
have you some kind of Star Trek fetish?
I'm only asking ecause i'm a trekkie myself, but i don't describe mating acouples as 'Klingons'.
hmm...
k_k
Clearly you've never seen a Klingon couple going at it, Kitteh. It's... something else, to put it mildly. XD
Oh god, battling tongues is almost as bad as dueling tongues though in this case I couldn't help but see battle ships at 20 miles or some such. Go Navy!!! Did enjoy it though.
loved the story. just need better description for kissing. dueling tongues and battling tongues are annoying its weird for my imagination.