All Comments on 'Yin's Yang'

Come on...WTF? love muscle? ...my third leg...latch on my pants...like a cat with its paw in the fish tank...my stiff rod...More slippery than grease on a door knob...my love syrup

Descriptive my ass...this is just full of sophomoric similes and metaphors.

Art..

Not only can you write a splendid poem but.. your stories are laced with detail and steam. Luring one into the moment, art moving into visions of reality. You are a wonderful writer.. and I learn from you always...

Thanx for the read..

Du Lac

Now that's some artwork

As always a wonderful tale :)