All Comments on 'Your Surprise Encounter'

I also find 1st and 2nd person stories very hard to read. Better to put it all in 3rd person. More importantly though, get someone to proofread for typos and spelling mistakes.

This would be a good story if it was corrected

I thought your story was super hot. Very good job, I was so caught up and transfixed. Great work.

Sincerely,

Skarlitt

Clearly written by a sex-starved man who only wishes this could happen to him.