All Comments on 'The Visit'

I could see myself as the recipient of your visit. If only it were really me you were visiting! Well written. Had me horny throughout.

You spin such a wonderful tale.

A pleasure to read.

My Regards

Robert

Thank you so much for leaving a comment on my story.

I enjoyed writing this little tale and I realized that I left the characters weak. I did not build them up as I usually try to in my stories because I wanted you to read it and be the character.

The comments that were made showed me that I accomplished what I had set out to try and do.

Thanks again and I do hope you read other stories I have written. Please vote and comment as you see fit and feel free to e-mail me, I will respond to each one.

Misty