I loved the analogy of your plant and your marriage both "dying a quiet death" within months of each other. I've killed a few plants myself, here and there, and i know what it feels like to look at something that seems to reflect your inner emotions.
I loved this little piece. It was very heartfelt, and very touching.
You have a way of touching my mind with your writing. That analogy was just too good to not feel a passion for. It may make some feel sad and others have hope.
Damn you are good at writing so many types of things. I would bet I haven’t read a third of what you have written, and I now should read some genre stories of yours I normally just avoid. You never disappoint in quality of fantasy and thought.
Thank you for sharing your talent and modesty of heart.
With much respect
I could say a thousand things about what the story of your "Sippy" meant to me and it still wouldn't be enough so I'll just say: Great, simply great. :)
I've read more stories through the Review Thread in the last couple of weeks than I've read for a long time. This short slice of life is both touching and deep. You have a profound understanding of the world and the components essential move through life. Thank you for writing this.
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