All Comments on 'Old Friends'

please get an editor and use spell check.

You are messing up a good story.

Traveller

Warm erotic story of two people who meet again a few years out of high school and hook up once more. Very enjoyable!

All good stories are not long stories. What the hell was that?

but you should try to get an 'editor.' Tuff (tough), relized (realized), got (have), sits (sat), startles (straddles), buy (by), push (pushed), the (they), trusted (thrusted), etc. Also, try not to end your sentences with propositions. Otherwise, good! Anon