All Comments on 'Fast Car, Fur Coat'

Although a short story it was sexy and hot. Love to think about having sex outdoors. Good luck in the contest.

Thank you for reading my story and for the feedback :) I am working on a longer one for my next story x

The sex was well written, but there wasn't a whole lot of others stuff to this.

Your intro was kind of a 'blargh' moment for me too. Things got better as they went along, but I'd prefer something more in a story than sex.

You've got good sex down. Bring the good other stuff.

Thanks G for your comments, I can see what you are saying that the sex is fantastic but you want a bit more filler :) will see what I can do for next time x