A very nice read, how about another chapter, seems mr Torres has some very specific plans for Suzie, like to know just WHAT plans.
Great start! Please continue :)
A good beginning to what can be an excellent storyline.
Although these chapters are small the second chapter has taken a little longer. ThanX for waiting. Hope you all enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it! Susie learns some valuable life lessons (wink) in Ch. 02: Who Do You Belong To?
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