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Making It Real

Your writing is so vivid that one can see and smell and taste what you are describing. Another 5.

Sharp & Sweet

A nice little, well-told tale.
HP

Ha de haber......

varios que leemos tus palabras esquisitamente sensuales y comunicativas tal que imagino con claridad was epoca y circumstancia. To lo agradezco por haber compartido de esa imaginacion fertil tuya. Disfrute muchisimo de la lectura.

Character development

You are a gifted writer but you seem to have a strange simplicity with your characters - they are either wonderful, awful, or idiotic. You get away with it because you write so well.

I love your story arc with Anita & Toni - you've left yourself so many options as to where to bring the story. I suspect that we're heading for break-up/reconciliation - however you write emotions so well that I'm looking forward to it.

On another note - how do you keep tack of your characters?

Another home run!

You have a jack for writing this stories and as with all the others you've written you've left me wanting more and being excited to see where the story takes these two on their journey! Thank you for all of the time you put into your stories! I have loved every one of them!

Lovely story.

Real emotions, good characters.

Great

Great story nice build up and believable.

I knew a Renee

The "Renee" I knew was also from upstate NY farm country. She was much taller than the one in this story but stacked like Renee and had a nearly insatiable sexual appetite. She had seemingly no inhibitions, loved threesomes, foursomes and moresomes of ALL combinations. What spectacular nights we spent together! Unfortunately she had a son with 2 young kids and couldn't stay out of trouble and had to move away to make sure the kids didn't end up as wards of the state.

Nicholas Templar!!!!!!!!!

You have caught the attention of the Evil Anonymous! Are you up to the challenge or do you cower behind the guise of having disappeared with this inactivity? You say you have the last of chapter 4 written but nothing has arrived. Your fans clamor even now for more of this story yet they lay disappointed in their beds at night. Barring an accident to your person you seem to do them a disservice here. Please continue the story if you are able.

loved it

Great story! I definitely want to see this story continue. This has the potential to be a great series. The build up and the climax (pun intended) of the story was perfectly paced. Keep up the good work

Fake as usual

Why can't someone post true stories??? In india,everyone knows its not easy to just have sex with someone you barely know for an year. Bullcrap.

Like GOOD!!!

Nicely done. The build up was good. The motivation was reasonable. Keep it like that and keep it coming.

Well crafted & written. You should do more than aspire to be a writer;

you are a writer. The only feedback I can give is to polish up your grammar skills as you made a couple tense errors.

The main thing is, you have the gift of storytelling, I hope you use it well.

Write on & on

You are doing it right. I just panned a couple of authors earlier because they were juvenile. You are doing yoeman work her bud and the result is truly enjoyable. Tnx, Lynn

Damn. In a store? Ryan is mad reckless. No chill.

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