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Thank you

That was one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read on this site and I've been on here almost every day for years. Very touching. You are an excellent writer!

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OMG

What a hot writer....
It does deserve a sequel. I hope that Nancy catches them....

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two talons up!

That was really fun, thanks for writing it. I agree with the last comment, a second part would be great. Maybe he gets a turn with Jeanie as well? Or a threesome with her and Gayle? ;)

agreed

shadowforce is quite correct...your character and her development is your affair please do not be swayed by anonymous negativity...the series is fantasy like a triple xxx version of the newspaper strip jane and should be read as such...if i want characters evolving i will read philip roth!...please continue in the same vein or whatever you choose but do not pander to the naysayers

Part 2???

best in a while, part 2 coming??

great story

To me personally I think it is well written. The varying story lines give different views on what love is young and old, straight or gay it doesn't matter as the old adage goes the heart wants what it wants. I think people are better served reading stories like this it shows that love is a very beautiful if sometimes hard to define thing. Thank you

OK, going to be brief. I really like this story so far, even like the two Lesbians because they are such interesting characters, although Caitlin gets the prize.

Your character... Your Story

This is your character and your story. You shouldn't let a few people (fans or not) influence your character. If we all did that then the creativity would die. If they want a character the way they want it. They can create their own. Thank you for sharing your work!

Inside her clit?????

Hi, enjoyed your story but either you got over excited or you are a bloke that doesn't know human anatomy very well. Twice in this story you wrote of actions that broke the erotic spell for me. "fingers inside of her swollen and wet clit" and "slid inside of her dripping wet clit". A clitoris is above the vagina and normally protrudes very few would be inverted and big enough to be penetrated.
Keep writing but please get someone else to read/edit them before you post.

Very erotic story

Well written and very hot. I have just one quibble: you wrote that Nancy took off her panties and dropped them in Laura's lap. But then when Nancy straddled Laura, she was wearing the panties again. Otherwise, a great story.

Wow english class!

Seems the only ones besides me reading your stories are are retired english teachers that are to self envolved to read for content and here just looking for typos and punctuation. Really?

what ?other story

you never finished this one ?????????????????//

Interesting Story

It had a really good start, but it would have benefited from more romance. Towards the end, it appeared to be shallow and frankly quite rushed. As aforementioned, Jack and Jill is quite out of place and lacks development. They should have served as a catalyst towards the bonding of the different generations rather than being involved with it.

This really does not belong under Mature. You've never really focused on the age differences here. Based on your focus, this belongs under Incest and Taboo.

well done

I liked the way you described how coolly the younger confident woman brings her older companion along and uses the shopping, ballet, and dinner experiences. It's highly engaging and got my panties wet. I'll enjoy seeing where you take this.

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