All Comments on 'From The Mind Of An Abused Woman'

Abused lady ~ making plans to return as a vengeful ghost.

she lost more than her dignity..she lost her life. Now she threatens to haunt the bastard until she drives him ..beyond the edge. Well done.

Very powerful read, though the outcome I'd have preferred would have been his dying and her recovering her will and self-worth. One other thing, as an example of how to improve your work, consider changing this:<p>I tell you I need you</p>

<p>And that I want you here with me</p>

<p>So why do you leave me?</p>

<p>Why do you flee?</p><p>to:</P>

<p>I tell you I need you</p>

<p>That I want you here</p>

<p>So why do you leave me?</p>

<p>Why do you flee?</P>