All Comments on 'In Searching the Heavens'

present a curious inversion, however it is followed through here as in

refuting its vision and the question and the answer

on counted grains of sand. - nice avoidance of cliche

5ed

Liked the first sentence; didn't feel the same about "counted grains of sand" until I realized it was an allusion. The ending was great.

I looked at your submission page, so in fact, this comment is more about the poet than the poem. (disclaimer) Some good titles there and here. I'm a sucker for the spiritual, and except for the gentle nudge(oy) I would not have seen it.

It read like a mini essay of the human condition as applies to the poet, however some editing to concentrate the essence would be good.in part as follows.

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in (senseless) (schizophrenic) questions ,

than (in answers provided)

by (mountain climbing mystics.)

Nice work