All Comments on 'Ripe Pears'

The spelling mistakes detract from what could be an interesting poem. Line 4 Gravity line 5 Losing. Perhaps 'Unleashed' would have been a better end word

There are some tasty lines here, which should have the woman this poem is addressed to swoon. I agree with UnderYourSpell, fix the spelling errors and to this poem would be perfect to me.

this is a beautiful, sensual poem that needs to have the spelling errors fixed. You can resubmit it with corrections and you won't lose votes or comments. Wonderful read. :-)

You are correct that "garvity" is a transposition error. However, "loosing," while it may be a poor choice of word, is spelled correctly. The word means to set free or release something. The intent was to make the tree appear to be actively dropping pears (to parallel the casting of chaff). "Losing" seems more passive to me. Perhaps, as I said, a questionable choice, but a deliberate one.

...to add to what's been said already, just to say I was here and voted.