All Comments on 'The Flame Within'

Sensual dances between lovers are seriously under estimated.

There is nothing more beautiful than a woman seducing a man through dance.

This poem captures the memories of such a moment on the sands. Very nice indeed.

very nice n so true... a kiss like eyes expose what words and everything else cannot. Capturing the essence of our being n passion. Keep writing... i will keep reading, here and in forum. Thanks again for sharing yourself.

With this, you hit a lot of good trigger points for me. Obviously, I like stories with flame lit romance. And I'm sentimental for the lingering memories, dancing, and tension.

The line spacing is artistic or poetically done. It may not be needed, but why not have fun including it.