All Comments on 'The Man of Mystery'

raw primal emotion trumps logic dear Sister

Had ME within your first two stanzas.....

"Lost in memories

He danced upon my Midnight

And held my soul bound.

He scooped me up tight

Held me breathlessly and cold

Yet, warmed me fully."

Luv when i get sucked into a poem or story.... so quickly.

hmm, perhaps I shouldn't have read this one first.... raising expectations for the other 3 yet to be read; uh oh.

This poem is beautifully written with a lot of thought.

Congratulations on your first successful publications on Literotica.

Well Done to you.

I'm sorry its taken me this long to get on to Literotica. I've been following your work on the 3DX forums and its always captivating to read. You have this knack or bringing the reader into the story and without warning it envelops your senses like a wave crashing gently over you.

Keep up the good work :)