All Comments on 'Wait'

by IvoryEpiphany

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A little teaser, raising the question of who is it that is always waiting?

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionover 17 years ago
reminds me...

of my ex-husband-why I stayed so long I will neer know

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
A..

legitimate question..Does it matter if I'm not there?

GEMINI6996GEMINI6996about 17 years ago
Validation

Typically the last to be sought after & yet forever the most important, SELF-validation is I believe the answer to this poem. An internal dialogue with the multiple facets of your Id will lead to an obvious concensus: you matter. Be it waiting for a bus, waiting for the kettle to boil, waiting for the rain to stop or the sun to shine; whatever the "event" they are all just symptoms of the greater blessing that is you. The star does not define itself by the planets, but rather the planets by the star...

Thank you for the joy of your writing and I look forward to seeing more in the future.

IvoryEpiphanyIvoryEpiphanyabout 17 years agoAuthor
Thank You

This is my personal favorites and to me is spiritual ... Thank you belatedly Passion and Amy the poem was meant to raise questions. Thank you GEMINI, for your support as well as your outlook.

As always your comments and critiques are most welcome

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