All Comments on 'Whispers of a Broken Heart'

I don't think there are many, if any, poetic elements to your poem. It's entirely uninteresting, and I don't think there's anything that represents who you are within the text. Try to put something personal into your poems and practice. We usually like to see some sort of effort has been made in the poetry section, just like in the prose section.

I don't know how to put more personal in it, maybe I do need more practice in poetry, either that, or I'm a lousy poem writer lol... Oh well, I suppose I should tell you in advance that I've posted two more already, so I can't do anything on the nonsense thing that you mentioned earlier...but thanks anyway for VOTING and COMMENTING... :)