- Loving Wives
- 1st Affair Ch. 04
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All Comments on '1st Affair Ch. 04'
by X-Factor
- 24 Comments
Anonymousabout 19 years agooit would be grand if randy caught her andkicked her ass out after rearranging herface so it wouldnt look so pretty for a very long time and not without a lot of plastic surgery... fucking cheating slut... death is to good for her
Anonymousabout 19 years agosome people claim that size does not count that technique is all important but believe me a large cock with technique is a quick trip to heaven and many return trips. My oldest son has the biggest cock I have ever had and I have had plenty. Huge cocks arise!!
Anonymousover 17 years agoRandy ahould come home and catch her and jason then dump her on the spot.
Randy did nothing wrong compared to what she did with jason randy didnt get laid like the girlfriend did.
Pat M.
Atlanta,Ga.
Anonymousover 17 years agoDam them two were going hardcore but u can't blame a girl 4 loving such a big dick lol
p.s: i'm not gay
Anonymousover 13 years agoThis story is such a turn on! Yes- they are incredibly wrong to do this behind her fiance's back...maybe they could try something different and introduce him to swinging~heehee Maybe Randy would get turned on watching that huge cock sliding in and out of her-hearing her moans of delight. I know when I picture it, I get all creamy! To watch that as its happening is a huge turn on for my lover and myself. mmmmmm...
Anonymousover 13 years agoSo we are meant to believe that Randy isnt going to notice that his fiancee has now has a pussy and asshole as loose as a air plane hanger whilst he has been cut off from her? Please if you are going to write cheater stories keep them in the relms of possibliity
DWornockalmost 13 years agoShe cuts off the guy she is engaged to and living with. However, she fucks some coworker. That is sick.
rick_ohabout 9 years agoAn hour later, Randy came home, very drunk. He had no clue what his fiance had been up to that night.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoHe fucked her in her ass and then in her pussy. She would have the worst infection in her pussy. Get real.
davwooover 7 years agoOnce you have gone through the fuck cycle of oral sex and penetration
And then you repeat it chapter after chapter it gets very boring. No stars
from me as you lack imagination.
Anonymousover 6 years agoFun to learn English with such stories, repetitions of unknown words are very helpful. Thanks for your work.
Will great to see the audio of all parts of this story with nice native speaker female voice. So be good if someone to participate with you. Anyway, keep good working.
Anonymousover 6 years agoBut if no one is married its not an affair, just wild unsafe sex!
and Randy is not as dumb as you make him out to be... He just doesn't care and will never marry the slut antway
widowedidiotover 6 years agoThis is no longer an affair, it's a relationship. Anyway your story is neither erotic nor arousing. it's just a story of two people satisfying their needs. it has no lead in, no content, no plot nor mystery to it. every chapter was a repeat of the first one. the only significance was her tiny feet and her glistening ring. one thing I would ask my students. and now I'm going to ask you. Why Randy? What does he have to do with the story, other than seeing her panties while she sleeps, oh! and a kiss on the cheek. Don't throw things in a story that you don't intend to give a life to, just the way you gave life to the bed making noises or the door. Randy has nothing to do with this story, and forget about having sex with her as it seems that he has already been without for months according to your timeline of how many times she's been with Jason. I haven't looked to see if you have any good stories, but this isn't one of them. And then you sink to the lowest a writer can do by trying to argue with a critic. A critic is the one thats going to make you better by exposing your shortcomings. he's going to make you polish your stories until you get to the point that the reader can not put it down because he wants to see what comes next. Thank your critics for paying attention to what they read.
ilimitadoover 6 years agoFirst couple chapters were hot. Then you recycled them; recycled them, and recycled them! BORING BORING BORING BORING
Anonymousover 5 years agoWhat a load of crap. No story other than a lot of fucking, and that became boring. Writing is more than fucking.
iameaselabout 2 years agoHopefully by this date in the future you have found the man of your dreams to make you a leather clad gimp and are happy being a cock holster.
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