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All Comments on '20 Years Ago Will It Be the Same'

by Satsumabook123

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Obviuosly need a following to that very good start

agp1056agp1056over 1 year ago

A good story concept that is in need of a final edit tune-up. The waiter's name changed spelling during the story, and other points could also have been dealt with in that process. This story leaves open the possibility of other chapters with these characters. I do hope the author does that soon.

NipkorNipkor10 months ago

Long to wait for that pleasure , 20 yrs of frustration in one night , very intense story line . Nice too .

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I am a very amateur writer. For a couple of years I wrote lots of stories just for fun, not showing them to anyone else. While I do make every effort the stories will contain many errors as I am dyslexic.The stories will never win any awards but I hope that many of them will b...