All Comments on '40 Yrs, In an Open Marriage, Pt. 10'

This was just awful. He's "proud of his cum slut"? More like he should be taking her to the hospital to have them run tests for all the diseases she just caught and to have the damage stitched up.

Big let down from part 9.

Thanks for sharing it

Tell us what Obsession makes you think of. [Not just Annette]

Lots of reporting but you have some pretty relevant scenes to describe. Everything is rainbows and unicorns and if that is how it went down that is cool. However, the tension building can be more than just sexual if you want to go that route. It just lacks a few things that separate good from great. The typos are not that distracting and the story is interestingl. Would like just a few more details to flesh out the characters psychogically. I honestly thought from ch1 you were gonna bang Deb.

It’s fantasy, doorknob. Theyre text on a screen and you read it to get off. Text doesn’t get diseases.

Forty years as a whore.