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Raquels_PantiesRaquels_Pantiesalmost 3 years ago

@Cristal-di-Canta,

Love the story. Just one issue … you keep switching back and forth between referring to Chrissy as he and she. She clearly wants to be referred to in the female gender. Other than that, 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Cristal_di_CantaCristal_di_Cantaalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your encouragement and helpful feedback! I am really sorry about that that! I thought I had fixed those, but obviously not and I know how irritating it is! Chris should always be he and Chrissy she!

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