- Loving Wives
- 6-4=3
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Click here"Hey Ryan," she smiled. "Do a good job. My hubby likes a clean office to bring customers into for meetings. He's going to run the company when Daddy retires, so maybe he can get you a promotion."
Melanie, even heavily pregnant was far more beautiful than I'd ever seen her. I wanted to kick myself.
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Ben
I guess that good things come to good people. I'm happier now than I ever thought I could be. There's no great secret, it's simple math.
Take six people...well two couples and the people that one partner in each couple cheated with. Subtract the four cheaters and that leaves you three people. And no my math isn't wrong when those two people are pregnant.
The end
- COMMENTS
Oatmeal19697 days agothis was not as smooth of a read as most of your works. felt like too many characters and narration bounced around a lot. Felt like a bit of an experiment. I'm at the start of chapter 3 but have lost most of my interest in the characters.
TrainerOfBimbos4 months agoGood story. Not quite enough pathos for me in regards to Sandy, who obviously went off the deep end. Ryan, for his part was always a scumbag right up until the end but I felt like Sandy was just damaged goods who let people use her and got in over her head. The sad thing is, with as much as she loved Ben, if she had told him about her past and they had gotten her help, it probably never would have happened. Just goes to show - there should be no secrets in a marriage.
Anonymous5 months agoGreat read. Might have been a little more interested in the psychosis of Sandy there especially more towards the end. I felt like I wanted a couple more sentences or paragraphs on her unraveling. Would be interesting to know if she had gotten a final conversation with Ben in, could she have gotten help or any sense of self awareness before becoming a stone killer ?
Harvey89106 months agoThis was a great story, full of twists and turns, and it is a five-star story, for sure. It seems like in the end the good guy wins which I love in a good story. Very well-written and very entertaining. Great job!!!
