All Comments on '7 Sins: Envy'

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CreeperclawCreeperclawabout 2 years ago

Huh, I guess if Dominic had said that his cum had to be injected into Brian's system he'd be less likely to try it... or maybe he really was more gullible than he thought.

I liked the premise of this story, reminds me of "Supplemental" and the execution was good although personally it would've been fun to read if Dominic could've talked Brain into taking a load up his other hole.

Since this is the beginning of a series based on the sins as a theme, I'm very curious to read how Wrath and Sloth will be used. Lust, Greed, Pride, Gluttony seem fairly simple to guess.

wicked_annabellawicked_annabellaabout 2 years ago

OHEMGEEEE.....love this. LOVE. THIS! thank u. can't wait to read the rest of the series!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Dang this writer has a great imagination and presents his stories so that they progress in a logical way...fantastic as they are.

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