All Comments on '750-07 Teacher! Teacher!'

Delightful story!

5

Well done! Thanks.

5 plus. The last line made me laugh out loud. Made my day. Thanks.

Very nicely done. 5*

He's going to quit the class just as he learns how to earn extra credit?

Left me wanting more for the two of them, which I suppose is the idea. Well done.

It's amazing how much you can put into 750 words. I got the whole picture of how they met, how he felt, how she felt, in one paragraph. The fact that it went from 0 to 60 so fast was a little remarkable, but passion can happen like that. First class story. Thanks!

Yawn.

This may be wrong, but she's been so lonely since her James died and Connor is so...

Present tense in a past tense story. Try:

This may have been wrong, but she was so lonely since her James died and Connor was so…

It's got to be fast moving which is a shame as could get a much greater story. Still excellent.

Would like to learn more about him. A Josh type character with actual handicap.

You got it! Look for more Conner and Miss Lawrence in the future.

Well done

Loved it. True love. Go get her, buddy. From one Vet to another, YEAH!!! 7 stars, because it was too short.

The BEAR

I think this might be the beginning of a beautiful friendship (apologies to Bogy).

Very Well Done!