All Comments on '750-07 Teacher! Teacher!'

Very Well Done!

I think this might be the beginning of a beautiful friendship (apologies to Bogy).

Loved it. True love. Go get her, buddy. From one Vet to another, YEAH!!! 7 stars, because it was too short.

The BEAR

Well done

You got it! Look for more Conner and Miss Lawrence in the future.

Would like to learn more about him. A Josh type character with actual handicap.

It's got to be fast moving which is a shame as could get a much greater story. Still excellent.

This may be wrong, but she's been so lonely since her James died and Connor is so...

Present tense in a past tense story. Try:

This may have been wrong, but she was so lonely since her James died and Connor was so…

Yawn.

It's amazing how much you can put into 750 words. I got the whole picture of how they met, how he felt, how she felt, in one paragraph. The fact that it went from 0 to 60 so fast was a little remarkable, but passion can happen like that. First class story. Thanks!

Left me wanting more for the two of them, which I suppose is the idea. Well done.

He's going to quit the class just as he learns how to earn extra credit?

Very nicely done. 5*

5 plus. The last line made me laugh out loud. Made my day. Thanks.

Well done! Thanks.

Delightful story!

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