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by JustRosie

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
good start

I appreciate the condom reference very realist. I liked the story alot but not to say that you should have wrote this or that, to me, in your future writings, some of the explaining might not need mentioning. I almost, again almost, felt that she was tired of playing the same RP with the same lines, etc. with the change of the missing underwear. It made me remember that this is married life, not good or bad. Thank you for your story I will be looking for more...

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