All Comments on 'A 21-Year Old Woman and Her Mother'

The author could do much better writing by signing up for an adult creative writing course at a local Jr college. His narrative was quite disjointed through and through.

Could not finish reading this, it is as if written by an eight yeare old.

Language and writing style bemoan immaturity.

Two ( 2 ) stars because I am in a good mood.

Terrible writing, a child could write better