All Comments on 'A Big Kitchen Table'

well done

Nice diversion from the usual. Ya done good.

Usually, stories that are interesting have to be long. Somehow, you have great erotic stories with lots of explicit sex, but you get into the heads of the people quickly. There's nothing wrong with longer stories, more background, build up, etc. But you have a unique ability to write short short stories which still don't feel like pornhub clips. I feel like I get the people, but I also feel the arousal.

Great for a short story. I find it even hotter since I have cum myself from giving a woman cunnilingus. Some women find it hot and it seems like you do!