All Comments on 'A Career Change? Ch. 01'

Fun story, good concept and the party details seemed plausible and engrossing. Felt a bit jarring switching Marshall's lust-interest from Kendra to Amy mid-story, especially since Kendra was the bait Marshall's friends used to get him interested in the job. I think a few characters could be combined to streamline the narrative, since most of them play little or no role in the main story. Intrigued to see where this goes in future chapters!

Fantastic work. That’s a great long story with sexy bits scattered all the way through to hold your attention.

I’m hoping when I click through to your profile that these characters will continue on with these adventures

booooring...

Volume cranked up to 11 !