All Comments on 'A Couple's Voyage Into Sexuality Ch. 07'

But perhaps you have a marriage like this, or used to, before the divorce.

Who is Arthur?

Good story and I like the series theme. Only complaint is that it's not well edited. Lots of switched names 'Arthur' instead of 'Edward' or Robert - Edward confusion. A few missing letters in words as well. 'Had' instead if 'hand'. Keep writing and let someone edit.

This is a steamy tale totally spoiled by carelessness. I find it so irritating that despite my curiosity I quit.

Who's Pat? (previous chapter). Arthur's back again, but who's he. Lots of confusion of names in this chapter Robert is stated but it should be Edward. Need fixing.