by NotHemingway
Okay so this was a non-story guarenteed to bore everyone to tears, seriously you thought this was erotic and sexually enticing?
I disagree with the person below me, I think this is very enticing, engaging, and is very well written.
This was a fun read but I couldn’t get myself really into the story as it was unbelievable even in today’s society. Perhaps because I’m from an earlier generation than most readers.
I gave this 4 stars for the nice presentation and grammar which is sorely lacking in many tales here..
Bill S.