All Comments on 'A Daddy to Save My Dad Pt. 02'

The lack of editing and proofreading destroys the enjoyability of the read. Probably wont read further chapters unless the writing improves dramatically.

Trying to make the next part longer for you all

Bon début .

J’espère qu’elle aura plus tard un collier et une laisse .

Peut être aussi la prostituer grâce à glory hole

I try not to grade too harshly for a few typos, but this has far too many. Plus, where did the months go? How can they be uneventful? Sorry, you need to step it up.

Needs so serious editing and proofing. Also disappointing how the sex parts keep getting glossed over.

I really enjoyed it. Thank you for writing!!

Hope more to come!