All Comments on 'A Dark Tale Ch. 07'

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 6 years ago
Just keeps getting better

I had no idea where you'd go with this story after Ch 06, and I was even worried that Ch. 06 was the end. I am glad it was not! I must say you surprised me. This is getting complicated and fascinating. Your writing is superb. Great Story! Five stars, obviously.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Amazing Story.

I've always loved your work, especially the focus on hot women in pantyhose. This current piece is your best writing yet. Please though, let Sylvia get pregnant before the end of all this, with no clue who the father is.

trashcan44trashcan44almost 6 years ago
Superb!

What an amazing bit of writing! You go right to the edge but never 'over the top'. I don't know what more you have in mind for Miss Summers but I can't wait to find out. Poor, poor, Sylvia. When your protector is also the scariest villain of them all it doesn't bode well, no?!

Good job!

kennyboy82kennyboy82almost 6 years ago

Superb story, and it gets more and more complicated with time. Sylvia is rapidly being drawn into an ever seedier world. I can see her being forced to sell herself on the street corner at this rate!

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