All Comments on 'A Daughter's Punishment'

The story felt very rushed, no build up or explanations about anything to do with the characters. It went very quickly from she's dressed a bit risqué to getting done by her dad.

dirty...

loved it! the abrupt pace if the story really worked for me. more please!

Nice beginning but way to short. Stretch the next one out.

Well, what I liked about this is that the dad took direct control of the situation and his wife went along with it. THere was no discussion and he made his point clear. Apparently, this had happened before with his daughter dressing provocatively. If she liked what happened she will continue to misbehave. In the future I can see her being sent to a school for misbehaving daughters that has a lot of discipline to try to correct her behavior. There are several courses of instruction that she would have to endure in order to return home.

Very good, can't wait for the follow up

The story had potential, but it felt like you really rushed it. Still, I'd love to read a part 2 if it becomes available.

Quite well done, but, even in fantasy, risking making your own daughter pregnant is an unacceptable risk to the baby.

Damn

This is hot! But it did feel rushed. I wonder if she will dress like that again..