All Comments on 'A Day at the Beach'

by CharlesWallace

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JOEMARINEJOEMARINEover 15 years ago
Hot story

Fantastic story, but short.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

CarnaleyeCarnaleyeover 15 years ago
Great Start

Very hot beginning.We want the next part soon.

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