All Comments on 'A Demon Cums in the Night Ch. 03'

Holy shit, that was amazing!

I definitely enjoyed your stories, but if I have one piece of construction criticism, it's that you should let your ideas breathe a bit more. Like a living thing, an idea needs room to be most effective, especially if it's an important elementary of the story. Many of your story events and descriptions could use a sentence or two more to fully develop. It's more room to add imagery and expand on the thought, leaving them feeling less rushed as the story jumps from sentence to sentence.

I was so wet, I fingered my clit so much