All Comments on 'A Dom's Revenge Ch. 04'

you act like a pure ass.

Someone who posts a story about a wannabe butch poseur, then disables the comments when they start going south on him...as you have done for all previous sections of this story.

However, I still think you're a bit of a fucking soft-cock for allowing her within your presence at all. Maybe you're a wimp pretending to be a man, I don't know yet. We'll see where this story goes and decide soon.

I'm not attracted to this kind of stories. Some roll playing seems OK. I can also understand his "need" for revenge, but this seems to go much further than what "reason" would require. This guy has become a sick pervert ego-tripper. Why do I continue to read all this. Call it curousity, certainly not appreciation. And this has nothing to do with a wimp attitude or whatever conclusion your fans may draw from this. The bit of sympathy I felt for him being the victim of this cheating bitch of a wife has vanished completely. He is worse than she ever was to him. And don't excuse it with providing for her nor with protecting her. These are just poor excuses. No matter how devastated he felt when she left him, no matter what she told him, he knows NOW that he was/is better than her during and after the marriage, that what happened was probably and partly due to some insecurity and she made an utterly mistake. But I still think there's no reason to extend this kind of life any longer. He has shown her what she missed out in a way of a better life, so give her some money, tell her the debt for which she was in fact not responsible has been paid and tell her to get lost. Tell her to find her selfrespect, find a job, get in better shape and to try and make something out the rest of her life. That would be a superior attitude. If he has lost his anger and wants to continue this kinky stuff WITH EQUAL AND CONSENTING PARTNERS, now that is something he can still pursue as much as he wants. G.Belgium

Not bad for a grade school effort, now pay more attention to your schoolwork and stop wasting time with your attempts at writing

What's less then crap? This story must be it. You have given your main "character" a ego as high as a mountain. I guess that must mean your dick is the size of a pencil. Regards, Umberto

geeze, now I can see why she fucked around on this loser in the first place. He's a much better person than she is? Yeah, right, I guess when it comes to exhibiting purely, evil, psychotic tendencies. Does anyone think this shit is hot?

I had browsed through this story yesterday just to check on the comments and noticed they were gone. Then I checked again this morning to find they were put back. Lol I thought I was crazy until I read a previous post below that the author DID disable the comments.

the entire thing. It's kind of scary. BDSM is not my thing at all, and actually think that this story belongs in that category well over Loving Wives. But even though this story isn't my cup of tea, I don't think that the author writes poorly. I can picture the story as I am reading it...It's terrible to read this and hope that eventually the slave will become...more than that. This is one of the darkest stories I have read on this site. And like a train wreck, I can't help but pay attention to it. Now I have to find out what happens next...

If you're going to whine about the content of the story, why take the time to read the entire thing and then comment? I'm not into BDSM at all, but this story is interesting. Talk all the crap you want about siresmega, but his writing and dialogue are both top-form.

Don't read it if you don't like it.

Losers. when_ever@yahoo.com

Smegma, I think you should get some professional help. You are one sick little puppy.

And today, comments are permitted again. Hmm. Ya don't think it has anything to do with this sack of shit getting messages about the lack of the comments, especially in light of the "All criticism is appreciated..." part of its bio? Ya don't think being exposed as the hypocritical moron it really is has anything to do with it. Nah, couldn't be.

Smegma, this was definately scraped from under a foreskin, it's too bad to be anything else

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Some Einstein said: <p>

I Like the Story <p>

04/11/08 by Anonymous in David in Olathe <p>

If you're going to whine about the content of the story, why take the time to read the entire thing and then comment? <p>

*** Obviously, some elementary logic and sound thinking have escaped Einstein here: <p>

*** The trick, Einstein, is to FIRST READ IT THEN COMPLAIN. It don't make sense to whine about something you have NOT read it, and have not hated it, or have not formed a sound opinion that it is a piece of garbage. <p>

I'm not into BDSM at all, but this story is interesting. <p>

*** I am NOT into BDSM, either, and I have no sound opinion on whether a "BDSM" --- whether as a practice or as a simply story --- is "good" or "bad." I can only judge THE STORY.... <p>

Talk all the crap you want about siresmega, but his writing and dialogue are both top-form. Don't read it if you don't like it. Losers. when_ever@yahoo.com <p>

*** Einstein keeps talking out of his behind: <p>

You can NOT "like" or not-like (hate) some story UNTIL AFTER you have read it, and judge it to be bad or unworthy of your time, Herr Einstein! <p>

*** A good, intelligent, dedicated reader READS A STORY FIRST.... And THEN he/she decides whether or not it's good, or bad, in what ways.... and THEN he/she rates it and then writes comments about the story. <p>

*** That's how things work, Herr Einstein. You read it FIRST, then judge.... You do NOT JUDGE IT FIRST and then not read it and then say the reason you have not read it is because it is a bad story and you'd whine if you read it. It don't work that way, Herr Einstein....

This isn't BDSM, it's more like pure sadism.

The wife isn't truly consenting, she is placed under duress and complies for some idiotic reason known only to the writer. This story is a complete piece of garbage and a complete waste of space.

like this story or this type of story, call the police and have them take away the person who is forcing you, at gunpoint, to read any chapters, much less all of the chapters.

Fuckin sick

All i can say is that kind of strong emotion there is always feelings it sounds like something close to ur heart. Did ur wife cheat on u ?? If so i guess writing this could be a way to deal with ur emotions . Its fiction people its pure pain . A writer crying out for help

The ranting and dehumanizing your protagonist revels in suggests he's never ever had to deal with someone saying, "no." The viciousness in this story goes well beyond the cathartic letting of spleen.

I suspect you were a pampered prince who always had someone to smooth the way for you. Then along comes adulthood and things just didn't go your way.

There is good help out there, I honestly hope you found some in the two years since you wrote this story. I'm going to sneak a peak at the last chapter, I hope I find something redeeming there. If not, I wish you peace.

Thank You for Your writing, I am only this far, but look forward to continuing the series. I am confused by many of the reader comments however. If you don't like it, don't read it. It is a STORY with REVENGE in the title. It is very clear that the stupid slave came to The Master in need. He made it very clear and put it in writing what her situation would be going forward in the STORY. it chose to sign the papers and it chose to stay. The world takes all kinds, if you choose to read and are distressed by the STORY, stop reading in my opinion. I have stopped reading STORIES here, usually because they are uninteresting or poorly written. SirSmegma's stories are neither.

Wow, to this point very vicious. I can feel your pain but excessive and cruel. I know this is fiction but still....