All Comments on 'A Dusty Manuscript Ch. 02'

Fun and worth the wait. I was almost a bit disappointed that so much of the chapter was taken up with the boink scene because I really wanted to see the capture and condition as well as the fallout afterwards. Seeing Shelly changed is hot enough, but seeing her reaction to being changed, if she realizes something big happened, is sure to be hotter.

Looking forward to Ch3!

I’ve really enjoyed your story! Please continue “A Dusty Manuscript” with more chapters and adventures of Eric and his slaves.

5 Stars. And I am sure that Eric can figure out how to enslave a yoga instructor if he puts his mind to it.

Awesome story, thanks for your efforts! I am looking forward to more of this saga, perhaps including Ray and Stephanie joining in a foursome or wife-swap. (Stephanie is naturally submissive to Ray and doesn't need the 'spell'. Or, since Shelly is now snared, she could fuck Ray as an add on to the four-some. I can foresee many DP's, lots of spit-roasting, with Elizabeth, Shelly, Julie, and Stephanie. Somehow he gets Elizabeth ensnared and life becomes even more interesting.