All Comments on 'A Facial Evolves'

Dialogue written by a fourth grader that's flunking English.

Nice attitude by an anonymous critic. I'll also bet that you have no works here.

True story my ass!!!! Would have been ok until you try and pawn it off as true

Nice story!

Hey Cal-- some people have great experiences and others have to read about them and then whine sometimes. I don't have time to make up fiction-- I'm not that creative-- but writing about the truth takes a 2-3 hours.

First of all, I would like to say how much I have enjoyed reading the stories so far. I am reading some in chronological order, so you can tell where I am at.

I am unfortunately now disabled and no longer able to work professionally outside of the home, but I have been doing work hours an editor for some friends of mine not on this site. I am not sure what is involved in editing stories for this site, but I would be happy to volunteer in helping you with editing your stories as far as spelling, grammar, sentence structure, etc.

I will contact you and leave you my email address if you are truly interested in my help.

This is a very sweet, tender love story that is unfortunately too short. The romantic atmosphere is marvelous.

Amazing! And inspirational. I’m gonna have to up my game and put myself out there more. Amazing