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Click here"What truth, Mum?" he asked, hearing the concern in his tone.
She took a deep breath. "Mark, the man you called 'Dad', Matthew Williams, was not your biological father."
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A/N -- I'm sure some people are no doubt going to think 'Oh god no!' and other things. So to calm any nerves, this definitely won't be changing category and there isn't going to be an enormous amount of drama. But I did want to add at least a little drama instead of this just being a romp every single chapter.
- COMMENTS
GaiusPetronius7 months agoI am enjoying this series immensely, and have rated each successive chapter a 5.
Up to now no observations worth sharing have come my way. In this chapter a minor objection formed in my mind, and that concerns the word "intimate." Intimacy is being used here as a euphemism for sexual congress -- in lieu of intercourse, fucking, hooking up, lovemaking, and other terms that don't come readily to my mind. The problem is that using intimacy as a substitute for sexual relations impoverishes the word. Some sexual unions, lamentably, are in no way intimate, and many forms of intimacy are unrelated to genital/lingual union.
Plainly you have written a story that is all about intimacy, but your use of the word does not acknowledge that truth. Each of the characters shares an intimate relationship with every other character and not every node in that netword of relationships is sexual. The story works, and the sex works, in this story because of their **emotional** intimacy born of their family bond and that established living arrangement. I just wish that the truncated, euphemistic usage of "intimacy" didn't eclipse the deeper, underlying intimacy.
Anonymousover 1 year agoyep, very similar to the other harem story called Memoirs.
and that story still on Wayback(archive) of you guys want to read
MADDOGINTEXASover 1 year agoAnd a good thing you did, too! A little family history/background...it adds to the "feeling" that already exists within the story.
I, for one, sssooo appreciate that UltimateSin has taken the time to write such a tale; there is obviously much personal involvement and commitment to writing here, a feeling for details and the emotions of the characters!!
You are correct, in your need for this telling of Mark's history...and all the girls are gonna REALLY be into him even more!d
Five**5**Stars...again, and again, and again!!
Rancher46almost 2 years agoI love how the author leaves this chapter on a cliff hanger. Can't wait to see the truth be revealed. 5/5
Demosthenes384bcabout 2 years agoThank you, thank you, thank you! I grow bored of series that are just sex with this family member, then this other one, etc. Great diversion and I look forward to reading the latest chapter! (Thank God I waited to catch up - the cliffhanger here would have killed me to wait long for next chapter.) 5*
