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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
good job

very nice story angel

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
in time girl, the stories will get better

there could have been soo much more rendered in this story, but all great beginnings come from simplicity, in time your thirst will develop, and it will draw from you ''music that will indeed soothe savage beasts ''In true submission, a girl learns that all her senses are hightened, by her One, your time will come

VampireKingVampireKingabout 18 years ago
Wonderful passion

This sweet angel of the night is the soul of passion and I look forward to more heated adventures from her. This is a very good beginning.

moonintheDarkmoonintheDarkover 15 years ago
Excellent

This is one of the most wonderful stories i have ever read...

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