All Comments on 'Fateful Summoning Ch. 01'

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KyrieEleison335KyrieEleison335over 2 years ago

This was fucking ADORABLE. Please make another!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That was amazing, can't wait for part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lovely story, and I’d be excited to read another part. Maybe with the Mother involved!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A decade is only 10 years isnt it? So she was born 20 years ago? Other then that good laugh the rest of the story was great. Looking for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fun reading, nice job. But Jamie couldn't help but make pleased noises through his closed hips?

MisterEboxMisterEboxover 2 years agoAuthor

To the last anonymous person, seems I missed one of those non-typo typos, 'h' instead of 'l.' There'll be an edit soonish for that and some other small things, so thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It started out kind of confusing but you remedied that quickly. It really moved at a great pace after that and became a wildly fun read. I would like to read more of your stories.

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Just some guy who got an idea to try writing erotic stuff.

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