All Comments on 'A Formative Summer Ch. 05'

Mmm we’ll written and hot. Hopefully She eventually puts him to work for Her and takes all of the fruits of his labor

All five of these "chapters" would have made a great first chapter to a story. Too short.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

So so good, can't wait for more! I do agree with the length being longer. It'll make the approval process on here easier for you without having to do it so often! But you do you, this is a great story!

Great story, but as stated by others, the chapters are too short. Just as the readers mind gets going, the chapter is over. It’s like you are teasing me. Please keep writing, as the story is very intriguing, and I would love to see where it is going.

when are we going to get more of this Great story? am so looking forward to it