- Fetish
- A Game of Chance
- Page 7
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Click here"You ready for your homecoming surprise?" asked her Mistress in the sweetest possible voice.
She nodded, smiling beneath the sheet and bouncing with the pure excitement of returning to her old life.
"OK...here we go!"
Seconds later, without warning the sheet was whisked away. Blinded by the sun, she blinked and as her eyes adjusted to the light she realized that...
She wasn't home; she was at the soccer field.
She was surrounded by hundreds of soccer fans and players.
She was stark naked.
AND...
She was TOTALLY HAIRLESS!
She turned to find that her mistress had left her standing alone, naked and bald in the middle of the field and there was absolutely no cover...anywhere!
It began as a murmur but grew quickly in volume and range. LAUGHTER. The entire field...players, audience, refs, EVERYBODY was laughing hysterically at her!
There was nowhere to run...nowhere to hide so, she ran. She ran through the crowd. Past her teammates, her friends. Past her Mistress and on out into the parking lot and she kept running. She dodged through the streets hiding from everybody she encountered until, at last she was home. HOME! She skipped up the walkway and up to the door, reaching to her pocket for her keys. No Pocket...No Keys...No Clothes...No Hair.
As her laughing neighbors gathered round and pointed Jujou fell back against the locked door and crying, slid to the ground. Her dignity was forever more in tatters as was her formerly big ego.
The end.
- COMMENTS
111Alexander111over 2 years agoIt seems unfinished. What happened to her after that? Did she just sit on the floor while she died of thirst? It needs an epilogue.
Anonymousover 4 years agoNot sure if my.other comments got through amazing story hooked and wanna read it again. But did she even get paid?
Anonymousover 4 years agoThis story was amazing true art I was hooked*<* so sad about the hair. But have to know did she even get paid or did I missed that part before she ran?
Anonymousover 6 years agoNow I want the start of the revenge chapters.... and she gets to keep the dog.
Anonymousover 6 years agoI had two problems with this story:
First - There were structural problems. Time changes, some for weeks or months, happened with no transition.
Second - The setup had the premise to be about submission. The wife was a bitch at the start and then became invisible, as far as interaction was concerned until almost the end. And what an end, suddenly this girl who has been treated as a submissive pet for four months, is humiliated, abused, tortured, and disfigured. It's as if a baseball game changed to tennis in the eighth inning.
